Forbidden Fruit

Sat, 07/18/2009 - 03:44
Submitted by lawesy

My name is Sarah, I’m 22 years of age and my friend Lawesy has let me post this story under his name. You see I haven’t seen my Dad for four years; he's a pilot and had gone to the Emirates after he and Mum divorced. We have exchanged emails and photos frequently, but it’s just not the same as seeing him. Now he is coming home for a 4 week holiday. He's hired a yacht in the Whitsunday Islands to spend a week sailing with my brother David and me. I've been looking forward to it excitedly for months and now, at last, the day had finally arrived...

MY STORY

My plane landed at Proserpine airport at 9.30am. I had waited patiently for 3 months for this day to arrive. I was about to spend a week with my father and brother sailing the Whitsunday Islands. Dad had been away for almost 4 years and I hadn’t caught up with my brother for 12 months. I emerged from the arrival lounge full of expectation and there was Dad with a huge smile waving to me. I ran to him and we embraced and hugged, it was wonderful to see him. He hadn’t changed at all, still as handsome as ever I thought to myself. Dad and I had always had a special relationship. In fact I sometimes thought Mum was jealous of our special bond. He picked up my bag and took it to the hire car. On the way to Airlie Beach we chatted excitedly and I told him how excited I was to see David after twelve months. Dad apologised and told me that David had called the day before and told him he was snowed under at work and couldn’t make it. I was disappointed but it would still be fun, just the two of us.

We arrived at the Marina and Dad carried my bag to the boat which turned out to be a near new forty two foot sloop. His gear was already on board and he’d had his briefing that morning. Not that he really needed a briefing because our family had been keen sailors for years. I went below and was quite surprised how spacious it was. He asked me to choose a cabin and I looked around. The forward cabin was quite large in boat terms and had what was almost an island double bed. I said “You have the big one Daddy” and went to look at the cabins at the stern. Both were similar and had double bunks, so I chose the one behind the head and small bathroom. I went up on deck after unpacking and Dad was ready to go. He started the engine and we immediately cast off. The weather was perfect with a light breeze. I was really looking forward to this.

Dad had chosen an Island about three hours sail from Airlie Beach but because the wind was on the bow he decided to motor all the way to save time. During the trip we exchanged stories and had a few laughs about some of the funny emails we had exchanged. I was amazed on occasion at the explicit nature of some of the emailed video clips he sent me; very raunchy some of them. Over time I had become far more open about some of the things I sent him too. At around two pm we finally arrived at our island destination and made our way to a small sheltered bay and dropped anchor. The island was quite small; one of dozens stretched out in the Whitsundays and boasted clear turquoise water with a palm fringed white sandy beach. It seemed like paradise and we had it all to ourselves. I said “Hey Daddy” (I had called him Daddy since I was a child) “let’s go into the beach for a swim and a look around.” I slipped down below, grabbed some towels and got into my bikini. When I went back up, Daddy was sitting in the tender waiting for me.

We rowed slowly in to the beach and it was like our own personal tropical paradise. We grabbed our towels and spread them out on the sand. I pulled my sundress off and lay down. Dad stripped his T shirt and shorts off and lay down beside me on his tummy. It was now about 3pm and it was still very warm. I said “Would you mind if I sunbathed topless?”

“Not at all” he said “It can only help improve the scenery.” and we both had a laugh.

I did feel a little self conscious at first but soon got over it when I caught him sneaking an occasional look at my boobs.

We lay there for a while before Dad went down for a swim, so I joined him. The water was cool at first but beautiful and we laughed and started splashing one another and playing like a couple of kids. At one point he tried to wrestle me so I jumped on his back and grabbed him around the neck. Suddenly it dawned on me how wonderful it felt having my bare breasts pressed up against his skin. I was amazed to feel a wave of arousal so I got off his back and went in to the beach. While drying off I couldn’t help notice my nipples had become very large and erect. I couldn’t tell if it was the cool water or the tingling in my groin that did it.

Dad stayed in for a few more minutes and when he finally made his way out of the water, I was taken by how fit and trimmed he was. He dried off and lay on his back sunning himself. I glanced over and was immediately drawn to the bulge at the front of his brief nylon swimmers. They left little to the imagination and I could clearly see the shape of his penis through the thin nylon. I couldn’t help but stealing regular glances and was amazed at its apparent size. Dad had been away since I was eighteen and I don’t remember ever noticing the size of his penis as a teenager.  As I thought about it I felt another wave of arousal and I felt a tad ashamed.

Not long afterwards we headed back to the boat. We went down below and Dad said “You have the first shower and I’ll follow you.” I went in and slipped out of my bikini pants, showered and rinsed myself off. I tried to dry myself but in such a cramped space it was difficult. I opened the door slightly and called out “Would you mind if I dried off outside the bathroom, there’s not much room.”

Dad replied from his cabin “Not at all.”

I stepped out with my towel around me and faced away from his direction to dry off. When I was done I slipped into my cabin and pulled a loose dress on. I came out and sat in the lounge in front of the galley and started flicking through a tourist guide. Dad made his way to the bathroom with his towel around his waist and went in. A short time later he opened the door and said “It’s your turn to look away now while I dry off.”  He stepped out and began drying himself but I couldn’t resist sneaking a look, hoping to get a peek at the size of his penis. He put his left foot up on the seat of the chart table to dry it and I felt a rush as I saw his penis and testicles dangling. His cock looked long and thick and dangled past his testicles. When he turned and saw me looking he said “Whoa Sarah, you’re supposed to be looking the other way.” He immediately wrapped the towel around his waist.

“Gee Daddy” I said “I’m sorry.”

“Not to worry, we’re family” he said.

We had dinner that night and cleaned up afterwards. We sat drinking wine and chatted for some time about each other’s experiences before he announced “I’m hitting the sack Darling, I want to get away reasonably early tomorrow.” He came over and kissed me goodnight and went to his cabin. I called it a day too made my way to my cabin and climbed into the bunk. As I lay there before drifting off to sleep I rubbed my clitoris lightly and in no time became wet and aroused. I tried to concentrate on my boyfriend but the image of Daddy’s huge penis was etched into my mind and I had the most beautiful orgasm fantasising about it.

When I woke, there was light in the sky through the hatch above me. I looked at my watch and noticed it was 6.20am so I decided to get up and maybe have a swim before breakfast. I went into the galley and noticed Dad’s door was still closed. I thought I should wake him because he wanted an early start. I went to his cabin and opened the door a little. I peeked through the door and noticed Dad was sleeping on his back and snoring quietly. His bed sheet was around his waist and he didn’t have a top on. Daylight was pouring through the half open hatch above him almost focusing attention on the fact that he had an erection. It was pointing upwards towards his head and lifting the sheet like a tent pole. I rather thought this amusing and slipped inside the door calling “Daddy, wake up.”

I couldn’t take my eyes off his pole and when he stirred he looked up and said “Good morning.”

I purposely looked down at his erection and said with a laugh “That must have been some dream you were having.” He realised and immediately raised his knees to cover his embarrassment and said “No dream darling, it’s my morning need to pee hard-on.”

I laughed and said “Come on move over and let me in; I need a cuddle after not seeing you in so long.” He moved over and I slid in beside him. Like yesterday, the sight of all this had stirred me up again and I could feel the heat and wetness spreading in my vagina. I was nestled in against him but he was still lying on his back with his knees bent to make sure I didn’t come in contact with his erection I guess. I propped myself up on one arm and said. “I’ve missed you so much Daddy, I love you so much.”

“I love you very much too darling and have missed you terribly.”

Just being with him there cuddling in bed had me highly aroused. I leant over and gave him a lingering kiss him on the lips with an open mouth. It obviously caught him by surprise because he said “Hey Sarah… what’s that about?” Without a word I pressed my mouth hard against his in a long and passionate kiss. My head spun with desire when I felt him respond and thrust his tongue into my mouth.

“Oh Daddy... I love you... I love you so much.” I whispered to him as I felt his hand reach up under my nightdress and cup my left breast. He squeezed my nipple and I said “Please suck my nipples Daddy” and I pulled my nightdress off dropping it onto the floor. He raised himself and buried his head into my breasts gently sucking and nibbling my nipples with his lips and teeth. I reached down and felt for his cock. I took it in my hand and wrapped my fingers around it. I had had a number of lovers over the years and none had anything like this. I knew my boyfriend Sean’s cock was 6” long because we’d measured it for a laugh one night but Daddy’s was something else.

I stroked his cock slowly and was astonished by its thickness. I felt his hand moving down between my legs and he cupped my swollen vulva and cunt lips; he slipped two fingers inside me and I sighed with delight. I badly wanted to see his penis in all its glory so I pulled the sheet back exposing him before moving down for a closer look. I remember thinking at the time that it was the most beautiful thing I had ever seen. It was smooth and pale pink with a huge mushroom shaped head that stood proud of the shaft. The skin was like silk and stretched tight like the membrane on a drum. On the underside veins stood out quite visibly. I guessed it had to be about nine inches in length as I stroked it lightly, cupping his testicles with my left hand. I was amazed at the weight of them and put my head down between his open thighs and licked and sucked them. I had never sucked a man’s balls before and my cunt was now flowing with my juices. I returned to his cock and opened my mouth wide, slipping it over the head of his penis. It was all I could do to get his monster into my mouth. I sucked and licked for a few minutes paying particular attention to the glans, corona and his frenulum. My boyfriend Sean loved this when I sucked him so I knew I was on a winner. I worked my tongue into the eye of Daddy’s dick and immediately tasted the slight saltiness of his pre-cum. Daddy said “Oh Sarah, I love you so much. Please can I put it inside you?”

I lifted off the bed and repositioned myself over his groin. Daddy held his cock in place while I lowering my cunt onto him. I was concerned with its size so I eased the head of it in and slowly lowered myself until I had completely enveloped him. I could feel his cock pushing hard against my cervix and for a while it was a little uncomfortable. When I had acclimatised to its size I began very slowly sliding up and down his pole. The sensation of having my cunt filled with my father’s huge cock was simply beautiful. As I got used to his size I found I could speed go faster and harder without discomfort. Daddy began thrusting to meet me and I soon felt my orgasm building. As my pleasure increased I banged down harder onto his rod. Then the first wave of pleasure swept over me as my orgasm began.

I cried out “I’m coming darling Daddy... I’m coming... I’m coming” The first contractions were the most intense, starting just inside my cunt before spreading deep inside me as my body shook with the spasms and pleasure. “Oh fuck” I cried out as my orgasm engulfed my entire being.

“Oh darling” he moaned “I’m coming too” and with that I felt his cock begin pulsing as he began ejaculating deep inside my cunt.

“I can feel you coming in me Daddy” I cried “Oh God I love you... I love you.”

Slowly my orgasmic contractions slowed and subsided and a feeling of wellbeing spread throughout my entire body. I had never experienced sex like this before with anyone; it was sensational.

I was still straddling him as I put my hand between my legs and squeezed Daddy’s dick. The feeling of it disappearing into my saturated love hole started my arousal again. I would have loved to keep on fucking but I knew it was too early for him. I relaxed and settled down on his groin as I felt his soft penis slipping out of my cunt.

“Darling I have to pee” he said. “OK” I said and rolled off him. He got straight out of bed and headed for the loo.

I was in an emotional state somewhere between contentment and arousal. I heard Daddy flush and exit the head. When he got to the cabin door he stopped. I looked up and asked “What’s wrong?”

“You are just the most beautiful creature in the world” he said as he walked over and lay beside me.

He leant over and kissed me again and as he did another orgasm swept over me. He kissed and sucked my neck and tits before moving onto my tummy. I felt his mouth and tongue licking and sucking my navel and it tickled in the most delightful way. He slowly moved lower licking and kissing and when it dawned on me where he was headed, more orgasmic bliss spread throughout my groin. Then he was between my legs sucking on my engorged cunt lips and clitoris. Sucking lightly then licking occasionally burying his tongue inside my vagina “This is all too much” I thought to myself as I started to climax again. I have no idea how long or how many times I climaxed over the next few minutes but they all seemed to blend into one another and form one long continuous orgasm. I was completely carried away by the pleasure of it all and beginning to feel emotionally drained. Daddy stopped his pleasuring between my legs and moved back up the bed. As he kissed me I detected the odour of his semen and my vaginal fluid on his face and the thought of it brought on another wave of pleasurable sensations deep inside me.

I felt for him and grasped his hard cock in my hand. I slipped down and started sucking on the head of his dick while stroking it with my right hand. I could taste the mild saltiness of my vaginal juices and it was bliss.

“Oh yes... yes...  yes...  keep on sucking it darling... around the head... it feels wonderful” he suddenly moaned.

I sucked harder and stroked faster until Daddy began thrusting his hips seemingly involuntarily. He arched his back and made a loud gurgling sound at the back of his throat as the first contraction deep in his cock spewed semen into my mouth. As I held base of his cock I could feel the strong muscular contractions as he pumped into my mouth. I thought I might gag because he seemed to go on and on but slowly the contractions subsided and the squirting gave way to a pulsing ooze. Dad lay completely still after ejaculating regaining his breath as I fondled and kissed his dick.

Finally he said “Thank you sweetheart, come up and let me hold you.”

As we lay there in silence I wondered what was going through his mind. Minutes later I broke the silence and said “Daddy, I want you to know that I have no regrets about what happened.”

“I’m glad Darling and neither do I.”

“There can’t be anything wrong with two adults expressing their love for one another in such a beautiful way, regardless of their relationship?” I said.

“That’s what people in love do to consummate their feelings for each other isn’t it?” I added.

Daddy replied “I agree Sweetheart but I guess not all families have the benefit of such a wonderful relationship in the beginning. Unfortunately a lot of people would see it as wrong.”

I added “Well I don’t, and I’m glad it happened. It’s only strengthened my love for you and I would like it to go on forever.”

“Sarah, you know that’s not going to happen. As much as I love you, I have to return to the Emirates in two weeks. You have your own life to lead.”

“I know Daddy.”

“Mind you” he said “We still have 6 more days out here. And judging by this morning’s events, I’ll be a total wreck when it’s over.”

We laughed out loud but deep down we knew there was likely to be some truth to it.

Anais Nin

tom.penry's picture
Tue, 07/21/2009 - 19:37

Had 'Sarah' not been over 21, I would have been negatively affected. Perhaps I was prepared for a story like this because of Anais Nin's reporting of sexual love with her painter-father. I can't quite yet put into words my feeling as I read the fantasy. It wasn't sexual arousal, more like sexual curiosity. I will wrilte more after more contimplation.

See me and my story in the Art Gallery: http://dodsonandross.com/art/coming-age

Please confirm authorship

NickN's picture
Tue, 07/21/2009 - 12:06

Lawesy,

Is the 'I' in 'when I wrote this' you or the 'Sarah' in the story. I get the impression that you wrote it in the first person singular as Sarah in order to attempt to legitimise the gender dynamics the story portrays. If the same story was written from the father's perspective I think the true nature of the story might have been too revealing for your own comfort, never mind the comfort of some readers.

While Tom thought the story 'marvelous' he does not say he was sexually aroused (though he could confirm that one way or the other), but I certainly wasn't. So while you might be refering only to yourself when you say:

"It’s a strange thing when a subject can on the one hand completely
challenge one’s sense of decency while on the other, induce sexual arousal."

you have already assumed a response in the reader; the generalised 'one's' in 'one's sense of decency' assumes and promotes the idea that the generalised reader will feel both offended and aroused. If you are refering to yourself, please say 'My'. 

If you are the author, it isn't good enough to distance yourself from your own work in the hope you can be treated as a neutral observer.

Furthermore, it is not necessary to challenge 'one's sense of decency' as some act of rebellion when most people's decency is challenged on a daily basis by the evening news. Challenging art needs to say something profound if it is to change attitudes and your story challenges nothing; it simply re-inforces the attitudes and difficulties sites like this are attempting to address.   

Sincerely,

Chu 

Hello Chu I respect you

Thu, 07/23/2009 - 03:13

Hello Chu

I respect you views and appreciate your comments. As mentioned,
I wrote the story with the intent of being a tad controversial.

I ask that you keep in mind however that the story was posted in
the ‘Fantasy / Fiction’ category. With that I assumed a fair degree of artistic freedom.

Note too that the story avoided any hint of exploitation. Both father and daughter were adults and participated willingly. To think that relationships such as I described don’t exist is naive in the extreme.

While we might believe that an incestuous relationship is wrong, if
it takes place between two willing participants, couldn’t it be a valid expression
of love?

And if no-one is harmed by the experience, who are we to say it’s
depraved and evil?

Creepy

NickN's picture
Mon, 07/20/2009 - 19:42

A truely horrible story that encapulates all that can go wrong in a parent-child relationship, dressed up as sophisticated erotica. Yes, the piece has been well written but does little to advance the causes of womens' rights, parenting or responsible sexual behaviour.

No best wishes possible,

Chu 

When I wrote this I

Tue, 07/21/2009 - 06:24

When I wrote this I deliberately set out to challenge people’s
attitudes and values.

It’s a strange thing when a subject can on the one hand completely
challenge one’s sense of decency while on the other, induce sexual arousal.

Marvelous!

tom.penry's picture
Mon, 07/20/2009 - 17:53

Very well written

See me and my story in the Art Gallery: http://dodsonandross.com/art/coming-age